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Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Ideas and Content
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A few months ago I got two little kittens. My family named them Socks and Boots.A few weeks later I came home one day and I couldn't find Socks. The next morning we found her. She was really swollen and she was sick. It made me sad. A few weeks after that my mom shut the garage door and Socks didn't move. The door shut on her tail. She then ripped herself free. She then only had half of her tail. The other half was no longer connected. She got blood all over the garage floor. Now she is gone. I think that she is dead. We still have Boots though. Boots didn't have any problems at all.
ReplyDeleteI am wrighting about when I went to Las Vages on Sunday November 15,2009. It was me my brother my grandpa and grandma. At the millatary base we were watching these planes and we got to walk up on a air craft carrier and come out the front of it we also got to see other ones on the ground from world war and planes today and what kind of planes from ealier on but then they improved them my favorite one was the thunder bird the wer so cool and then they did some in the sky and they would fly right straight for each other and just before you thought that they would crash they would turn there planes side ways and miss each other by like less than a foot or so and they would turn on there smoke stuff to make things and they did a sneak attack when every one was watching these one planes another one came like full speed that makes itt really loud and it would hurt your ears and no one expected it and the thunder birds are extremely loud when they go full speed like that.That was what I did like all Sunday.
ReplyDeleteThis summer I went to Lagoonabeach.I went on the water slide after eating 1 hotdog, 2 burgers ,and 3 cookies .I took the long walkup to the body slidesand reached the top of the stairs. Then I got in line and waited for a long time.I started to shake when it was my turn so I told myself lets get it over with. I flung myself down the pitch black slideand turned a couple turns then saw a light.Igot to the end and puked in the water.Everyone gaged and said eaw.
ReplyDeleteMe and my family where going fishing in the afternoon at a lake. It wasw a nice day uot side.I cought four fish that day.
ReplyDeleteOne time me and my brothers all four of us were on one three wheeler and we went on this jump like a thousand times.And we wen around the farm a
ReplyDeletefew times and our cousins were with s when this happened well anyway my brother went
around the farm
so many times that all of us weren't paying enough attention to the jump and we went off the wrong side of the jump where the sement was at and we crashed and the three wheeler landed on me and one of my brothers and my two brothers went for help.